Dorian Lake spent years cornering the Baltimore hex-crafting market, using his skills at the hermetic arts to exact karmic justice for those whom the system has failed. He keeps his magic clean and free of soul-corrupting Netherwork, thus avoiding both the karmic blow-back of his practice and the notice of the Presidium, a powerful cabal of practitioners that polices the esoteric arts in America. However, when an unscrupulous Netherworker interferes with both his business and his personal life, Dorian’s disarming charisma and hermetic savvy may not be enough to keep his soul out of jeopardy.
His rival, a soul monger named Neil Osterhaus, wouldn’t be such a problem were it not for Carmen, Dorian’s captivating ex-lover. After two years’ absence Carmen arrives at Dorian’s doorstep with a problem: she sold her soul to Osterhaus, and has only two weeks to buy it back. Hoping to win back Carmen’s affections, Dorian must find a replacement soul without tainting his own. As Dorian descends into the shadows of Baltimore’s underworld, he must decide how low he is willing to stoop in order to save Carmen from eternal damnation… with the Presidium watching, waiting for him to cross the line.
If it sounds like I’ve been harping on this concept for my past few reviews, it’s because yet again, I have another book that proves just how important character development really is. When I started this book, it didn’t quite grab me, the story wasn’t quite there. I kept reading though, and then all of the sudden I was hooked. And I had Dorian to thank for it. Dorian is the heart and soul and glue that holds this book together. He’s a good guy, trying to keep his head above water. As it becomes harder and harder for him to do so, he does things he never thought he’d do before and sacrifices so much for something that he didn’t have to allow himself to get so vested in. You want to see him succeed, not because you care about who he’s acting on behalf of, but because you genuinely like him. He has his back up against a metaphorical wall by the end of the book and you finish it hoping that he can find a way out. Dorian’s voice here is key: he carries the air of a world-weary PI, without quite falling into the tropes. He can be confident and even a bit cocky, but Sloan manages to avoid making him too arrogant or smug or otherwise unlikable. It also helps that Dorian is surrounded by a cast of likable friends and enemies. The one shortfall I would say is his ex Carmen who toes the line of just being a flat out bitch and a twist regarding her story was predictable and kind of disappointing.
On the magic front, I do wish we saw a bit more. We do get some basics laid out for us, but given how important it winds up being to resolving the central resolution of the plot, it felt like a lot of done was off-page and that’s always a bit annoying to me since it does feel like a cheat and because I think he’s got something interesting going on there. I’d also like to see more of the Presidium. Thanks to his narration, we get the vibe that they’re supposed to be kind of a Big Bad – remind me of the Authority on True Blood: a group that not only rules the vampires, but gaining their attention is all but a death sentence – but they didn’t do enough to make me believe that. A bit too much tell over show.
Over all, I thought this felt like a solid introduction to a good Urban Fantasy series. There’s definitely plenty of room for a sequel based on how the story ended, and from what I can glean from his Twitter feed he is writing. That said, this was originally published in 2012, and re-released by Curiosity Quills in September 2014. The only other title I could find was a prequel short story published in 2013 by Smashwords and set to be re-released by Curiosity Quills “soon.” Goodreads doesn’t have the book listed under any kind of series (though the website does call it the “Dark Choir” series), and I find nothing that indicates the release of a sequel any time in the near future. If you’re the kind that likes to wait to have series be finished (or at least realistic expectations for when the next book will come out) you may want to keep waiting because it may be a long one. Shame too, because I’m definitely vested in Dorian’s future.
Edited to Add: Good news! The publisher has confirmed there is a sequel coming – tentative release date of Spring/Summer 2015. That’s not a bad wait after all! Read away, folks.
Verdict: Buy it